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the clarity of realisation by *NikiP:iconNikiP:





i have an absence of thought,
actually no,
no there is thought,
there is so much thought,
there is an abcsence of realisation,
the world spins as smoothly as it did before,
will continue spinning with out me,
as will the people carry on without,

our mistakes are scars on the earth,
our triumphs are warm sensations within the hearts of our loved ones,
i can not confess to either,
no man walking this earth can show recognition of myself,
my actions,
my miseries,
my elations,

the earth is wasted on people like me,
people who endevour to suceed or to fail,
but can suceed in neither,
but to fail in both,
the clarity of realisation,
the waste that is me,
is the single biggest wound i could inflict to this world.
©2004-2009 *NikiP
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:iconpeach2000:
wow thats really gd
very meaningful
i especialy like the line "our mistakes are scars on the earth,"
very cool
gd work
keep it up

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for all we could have done
and all that could have been
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:iconnikip:
thanks v.much!

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:iconpeach2000:
not a prob

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for all we could have done
and all that could have been
miss u man


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:icondyingechoes:
The feeling...

you are far from failure.... be it only a written fear or a true feeling.... remember that- You have been recognized! You are seen! You fail in naught but that you wish to seek failure in yourself! See that others, for I am not the only, see you for more than loss!
:iconeriatarca:
great composition =) nice work :clap:

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:iconkwazo:
wow ....

the earth is wasted on people like me,
people who endevour to suceed or to fail,
but can suceed in neither,
but to fail in both,
the clarity of realisation,
the waste that is me,
is the single biggest wound i could inflict to this world.

Great last stanza and ending, again great language
:iconnikip:
thank you! its nice to gte praise from a fellow poet, makes it just that little bit mroe special

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:iconrapsucks:
thats a deep poem. Great job! and i love the picture. :)

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thx

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